I only wanted to point out, and while I didn’t forget from “here” to “there” being gmail, of an absent hyphen. Perhaps, though you don’t necessarily need it from “ILL” to “Fortune”. A hyphen between these two words, and especially that they are on seperate lines, would help with flow. But, as illwill, or ill-fated, or ill-conceived, would have it. The simple way, in this wretched language of ours, is usually the best way.
Just a thought.
All three of these “Foldy” comics are very good indeed boy.
Reid,
I only wanted to point out, and while I didn’t forget from “here” to “there” being gmail, of an absent hyphen. Perhaps, though you don’t necessarily need it from “ILL” to “Fortune”. A hyphen between these two words, and especially that they are on seperate lines, would help with flow. But, as illwill, or ill-fated, or ill-conceived, would have it. The simple way, in this wretched language of ours, is usually the best way.
Just a thought.
All three of these “Foldy” comics are very good indeed boy.
Father Yawnny Goga
Just published a review of the “book” on my site (http://stumptowntradereview.blogspot.com/2010/03/you-say-you-want-mini-comic-revolution.html). Great work! Can’t wait to see more!!!!